2018 英语一 Text 3|医疗数据交易:真正的问题不是隐私,是垄断

主旨

评估英国国民医疗服务体系(NHS)与 DeepMind 的交易,先要承认双方都出于好意;AI 用于医疗潜力巨大,但也可能让权力进一步集中到科技巨头手里 → 信息专员严厉裁定:NHS 下属医院信托依据一份模糊协议,把 160 万患者记录交给 DeepMind,几乎不顾患者权利和隐私 → 双方已纠正,但隐私并非唯一、甚至不是最重要的角度:数据的价值来自处理与聚合,而不是单纯持有 → 关键问题是谁该从海量数据分析中获益;隐私法思路跟不上监控经济 → 真正的担忧是:用公共资源开发的算法将归私人垄断者所有;要避免”数字封建主义”需要长期斗争,这份报告是可喜的开端。

原文:2018 Text 3 · 话题:科技 / 医疗 / 隐私 · 答案:31 B|32 C|33 D|34 D|35 B

一、核心词

词本文义原文搭配拆解 / 记忆
fair-minded adj.公正的Any fair-minded assessment of the dangers of the dealfair + minded
assessment n.评估Any fair-minded assessment of the dangers of the dealassess 评估
acknowledge v.承认must start by acknowledging that both sides mean wellac- + knowledge 知道
concentration n.集中further concentration of power in the tech giantscon- + centr 中心
commissioner n.专员the information commissioner, Elizabeth Denhamcommission 委员会
damning adj.严厉谴责的has issued her damning verdict against the Royal Free hospital trustdamn 谴责
verdict n.裁决has issued her damning verdict against the Royal Free hospital trustver 真 + dict 说 → 说出真相
vague adj.模糊的a vague agreement which took far too little account of the patients’ rights
privacy n.隐私their expectations of privacyprivate 私人的
mend v.改正The NHS trust has mended its ways.原义”修补”
scrutinise v.仔细审查will be carefully scrutinised
permission n.许可all necessary permissions have been asked of patientspermit 允许
consent n.同意informed patient consentcon- 共同 + sent 感觉 → 意见一致
distinction n.区分this distinction misses the pointdistinct 不同的
aggregation n.聚合it is processing and aggregation, not the mere possession of bits, that gives the data valueag- + greg 群 → 聚成群;同根 congregate
possession n.拥有it is processing and aggregation, not the mere possession of bits, that gives the data valuepossess 拥有
generate v.产生who should benefit from the analysis of all the data that our lives now generategen 产生
identifiable adj.可识别的identifiable knowledge about themidentify + -able
surveillance n.监控That misses the way the surveillance economy works.sur- 上 + veill 看
countless adj.无数的compared with the data of countless millions morecount + -less
curb v.约束The use of privacy law to curb the tech giants in this instance feels slightly maladapted.
maladapted adj.不适用的The use of privacy law to curb the tech giants in this instance feels slightly maladapted.mal- 坏 + adapted 适应的
algorithm n.算法the algorithms DeepMind develops
monopoly n.垄断者a private monopoly which developed them using public resourcesmono 单一 + poly 卖
pharma n.制药公司a big pharma has done同根 pharmacy 药房
gigantic adj.巨大的small choices now may turn out to have gigantic consequences latergiant 巨人
feudalism n.封建主义a future of digital feudalismfeudal 封建的

二、搭配与写作迁移

原文表达含义写作迁移
start by doing首先要……Any solution must start by listening to the public.
mean well出于好意Parents mean well, but too much pressure hurts.
lead to further concentration of power导致权力进一步集中
It is against that background that …正是在此背景下……It is against this background that the policy was introduced.
issue a verdict against对……作出裁决
hand over A to B把 A 移交给 Bhand over personal data to companies
on the basis of依据
take account of考虑到take account of students’ needs;= take into account
expectations of privacy对隐私的期待
mend one’s ways改正做法
ask permission of sb征得某人许可
informed consent知情同意
There are lessons to learn.有教训要吸取There are lessons to learn from this failure.
concentrate the blame on把责任集中推给
miss the point没抓住要点This argument misses the point that …
give sth value赋予……价值
benefit from从……获益benefit from the analysis of data
build on以……为基础build on previous research
in this instance在这件事上
address the real worry解决真正的担忧
It is not enough to say that …光说……是不够的
What matters is that …重要的是……What matters is not speed but quality.
belong to属于
on the scale that以……的规模
turn out to have gigantic consequences结果带来巨大后果
a welcome start可喜的开端The new rule is a welcome start.

三、熟词僻义

  • mean v. 本意是(mean well,≠意思是):both sides mean well
  • issue v. 发布(≠问题):has issued her damning verdict against the Royal Free hospital trust
  • trust n. 信托机构(≠信任):the Royal Free hospital trust
  • record n. 病历档案(≠纪录):handed over to DeepMind the records of 1.6 million patients
  • process v. 处理(数据)(≠过程 n.):DeepMind merely “processed” it
  • bit n. 比特(≠一点儿):the mere possession of bits
  • angle n. 角度(≠角):not the only angle in this case
  • informed adj. 知情的(≠消息灵通的):informed patient consent

四、题目与选项词

词 / 搭配义出处拆解 / 记忆
due adj.应有的Q31 [B] pay due attention to熟词僻义:≠到期的
fall short of未达到Q31 [C]
resistance n.抵抗Q32 [B]resist 抵抗
adjustment n.调整Q32 [C]adjust 调整
sincere adj.真诚的Q32 [D]
at all costs不惜一切代价Q33 [A]
leak v.泄露Q33 [B]
vicious adj.恶性的Q34 [A]vice 恶
rivalry n.竞争Q34 [A]rival 对手
enforcement n.执行Q34 [B]enforce 执行
ambiguous adj.模棱两可的Q35 [A]ambi 两边
cautious adj.谨慎的Q35 [B]caution 小心
appreciative adj.赞赏的Q35 [C]appreciate 欣赏
contemptuous adj.蔑视的Q35 [D]contempt 蔑视

五、同义替换:原文 → 正确项

题原文正确项
31 Ba vague agreement which took far too little account of the patients’ rightsIt failed to pay due attention to patients’ rights
32 CThe NHS trust has mended its ways.necessary adjustments
33 Dit is processing and aggregation, not the mere possession of bits, that gives the data valuethe value of data comes from the processing of it
34 DWhat matters is that they will belong to a private monopoly which developed them using public resourcesthe monopoly of big data by tech giants
35 BThe potential of this work applied to healthcare is very great, but it could also lead to further concentration of power in the tech giants / A long struggle will be needed to avoid a future of digital feudalismcautious

六、长难句

① 强调句 + 两层定语从句(Q31 出处)

It is against that background that the information commissioner, Elizabeth Denham, has issued her damning verdict against the Royal Free hospital trust under the NHS, which handed over to DeepMind the records of 1.6 million patients in 2015 on the basis of a vague agreement which took far too little account of the patients’ rights and their expectations of privacy.

  • 主干:It is against that background that the commissioner has issued her damning verdict(强调句,强调 against that background)
  • which handed over to DeepMind the records …:非限制性定语从句修饰 trust;hand over A to B 中 to B 提前,因为 A 太长
  • which took far too little account of …:定语从句修饰 agreement
  • 译:正是在这一背景下,信息专员伊丽莎白·德纳姆对 NHS 下属的皇家自由医院信托作出了严厉裁决:该信托 2015 年依据一份模糊的协议,把 160 万名患者的档案交给了 DeepMind,而那份协议几乎完全没有考虑患者的权利和他们对隐私的期待。

② 同位语从句 + 强调句(Q33 出处)

But this distinction misses the point that it is processing and aggregation, not the mere possession of bits, that gives the data value.

  • 主干:this distinction misses the point
  • that it is … that gives the data value:同位语从句解释 point;从句内部是强调句 it is … that …
  • not the mere possession of bits:插入,与被强调部分对比
  • give sth value:双宾语,赋予……价值
  • 译:但这种区分没有抓住要点:赋予数据价值的是处理与聚合,而不是单纯持有数据。

③ if 条件句 + 省略 + as 比较(Q34 背景)

If software promises to save lives on the scale that drugs now can, big data may be expected to behave as a big pharma has done.

  • 主干:big data may be expected to behave as a big pharma has done
  • If 从句:promise to do 有望做
  • on the scale that drugs now can:that 引导定语从句修饰 scale,can 后省略 save lives
  • as a big pharma has done:方式状语,“像大药企那样”
  • 译:如果软件有望以今天药物的规模拯救生命,那么可以预料,大数据公司的行为会像大型制药公司过去那样。

七、句型

  • Any fair-minded assessment of A must start by acknowledging that …(客观开篇) 原句:must start by acknowledging that both sides mean well 套用:Any fair-minded assessment of online education must start by acknowledging its convenience.
  • The potential of A is very great, but it could also lead to B.(利弊兼顾) 原句:The potential of this work applied to healthcare is very great, but it could also lead to further concentration of power in the tech giants. 套用:The potential of AI in education is very great, but it could also lead to over-reliance on machines.
  • But A is not the only angle in this case and not even the most important.(转换视角) 原句:But privacy is not the only angle in this case and not even the most important. 套用:But cost is not the only angle in this case and not even the most important.
  • It is not enough to say that … What matters is that …(深化论点) 原句:It is not enough to say that the algorithms DeepMind develops will benefit patients and save lives. What matters is that they will belong to a private monopoly which developed them using public resources. 套用:It is not enough to say that technology makes life easier. What matters is who controls it.
  • We are still at the beginning of A and small choices now may turn out to have gigantic consequences later.(强调当下选择) 原句:We are still at the beginning of this revolution and small choices now may turn out to have gigantic consequences later. 套用:We are still at the beginning of the AI age, and small choices now may turn out to have gigantic consequences later.
  • A is a welcome start.(肯定收尾) 原句:Ms Denham’s report is a welcome start. 套用:The new regulation is a welcome start.